Our developmental edit for a children's picture book manuscript includes commentary and re-write suggestions where needed across:
 
Story Structure and Plot Evaluating the overall narrative arc, ensuring the story has a clear beginning, middle, and end that works within the 32-page picture book format. This includes checking that the plot moves at an appropriate pace and maintains young readers' attention throughout.
 
Character Development Assessing whether characters are well-defined, relatable to the target age group, and show appropriate growth or change throughout the story. The editor examines whether characters' motivations are clear and their actions consistent with their personalities.
 
Theme and Message Analyzing whether the story's central theme is age-appropriate, clearly conveyed without being preachy, and resonates with both children and adult readers. This includes ensuring any lessons or morals emerge naturally from the story.
 
Target Audience Alignment Evaluating whether the content, vocabulary, concepts, and emotional complexity match the intended age group. The editor considers developmental appropriateness and whether children will connect with the story elements.
 
Pacing and Scene Flow Examining how the story unfolds across the typical picture book page structure, ensuring natural page-turn moments and appropriate pacing for read-aloud sessions.
 
Dialogue and Voice Assessing whether dialogue sounds authentic for the characters and age group, and whether the narrative voice is engaging and consistent throughout.
 
Market Viability Providing feedback on how the manuscript fits within current children's book market trends, potential publisher interest, and competitive titles.
 
Overall Story Impact Evaluating the emotional resonance, entertainment value, and whether the story achieves its intended purpose of engaging young readers.
A developmental edit addresses big-picture story elements rather than line-by-line language issues.